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A day like others in Los Angeles, California. The sun shone in the sky warming the city in that Saturday afternoon.
In the city suburbs a black and red car followed by another green with black stripes was traveling with a speed a little too moderate.
"Holy shit! This fucking pedal is called accelerator for an obvious reason!" a voice screamed angrily in the first car.
"B-but... I think I'm driving already faster then before..." a male voice answered to the scream with a noticeable hesitation, or embarrassment.
"Faster?! You're going slower than a fucking snail! Who the hell taught to you to drive a car?!" the voice now sounded like more angry, the volume of it was really more higher then before.
"My... my mother...." A silence fell in the car, a weird silence.
Meanwhile in the other car, a guy with black hair and dark blue eyes was driving following the red and black car. Next to him was sitting a young woman with light brown hair in a side ponytail and green eyes.
"Jin, I don't think that this will be a good idea. Your sister can't teach to James how to drive in a race. I still thinking that was better if you was the teacher..." the young woman looked really worried looking at the car in front of her, then moved her look to Jin.
The black haired guy smirked, "Nah, let her having a possibility. I'm sure that everything will be fine, Kassy." He said looking the car that preceded him.
"Stop this fucking car and get off right now!" the car stopped immediately, the right car door opened fast and a 'girl' got out, short black hair and light blue eyes, clothes that normally a girl doesn't wear, with a shocked expression mixed to an angry one.
Even the green car stopped, Jin and Kassy got out from their car, the young woman had a worried expression on her face and now even the guy looked a little worried knowing the personality of his sister.
-"Are you deaf?! I said get off! You stupid bee!" the black haired girl looked like was near to a nerve explosion, she was looking to the car with an angry look clenching her fists strongly.
"Airi, please, calm down..." Jin's tried to calm down his sister with good manners, meanwhile the guy who was driving the red car was getting out from the car.
"Airi, please, stop calling me bee... only because I wear a black headband and my hair is honey-colored doesn't means that I'm a bee..."
Airi walked over and looked him in his eyes with a fake calm look "A bee... is faster... than you, James... I must call you snail! You're a fucking snail!" the black haired girl screamed in face of him, changing expression in a second, then she grabbed James by his hoody angrily and pulled him to face to face with her.
Ok, this isn't really bad... , James thought with a little smirk in his face.
"Listen to me, James. I'll no more give you driving lessons... understood? I give up with you! You made my car crying... my sweet car... nobody... can make my car crying..." Airi growled and the smirk on James face disappeared is a second, then she let him go and walked to the driving place "Jin, I leave everything to you now.... good luck" the girl said while closing the car door.
Jin sighed and walked over her knocking the car door, the car window was lowered showing her angry face.
"Airi...", the guy said with a calm look.
"Isn't my fault, Jin. He really can't drive in a race." the girl said softly, trying to stay calm.
"I know but... give him a possibility. He's a good guy and don't deserve all that." Jin said "By the way... for dinner I'll go to a restaurant with Kassy so you'll be alone... What do you of inviting James?", then said with a little smirk on the face.
Airi crossed her arms on her chest puffing and trying to look elsewhere, the black haired guy continued to stare at her crossing his arms too, "Ok! Don't being so insistent!" the girl said puffing out her cheeks.
Jin raised an eyebrow "Insistent?" then he walked toward his car, "Come on Kassy, is better if we go home right now... I know you need your time for being ready for the dinner" he said scratching his head, as he usually do when he provokes someone.
Kassy raised both her eyebrows in incredulity, hoping that she heard wrong "My... my time?" the young woman slammed her hand on the hood of the green car with irritation, "Who is the 'forever late guy' here? Yesterday you had to come at my house for lunch... you arrived after 3 damn hours!" Kassy said with loud voice.
No good... thought Jin, "I... I was working to my car a-and you know that when I do it I forget about everything." he said sweating "And I was only joking dear, only joking... Ok?"
Airi peered from her car window looking at the blond haired guy "James... do you want to come to my place for dinner?" she asked annoyed.
"R-really?!", James stammered, This is my opportunity for... he thought while a big smile was appearing on his face, "Sure Airi!" he answered, Carpe diem James, Carpe diem this was his lkast thought before running into the car.
"Ah! Jin! Don't forgot about this night, you can't miss it." Airi said to her brother winking.
James winked back, "If I'll miss it... nothing will start." he said.
Airi laughed and then closed the car window, "What can we eat for dinner?", she asked to her friend sat next to her.
"Even if I'll say I wanna something else to eat you'll choose the same as always... so... hot dog and fries." James said with a tone of surrender.
"Good choice!" Airi said, then she turned on the car and headed for the fast-food.

This day started as any other, soon it would turn into an unforgettable day for someone.

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This is the WIP of my original story, I really hope I've written enough good even if nobody will read it -.-

Iìm still writing everything, this story had to be a manga but right now I'm not enough good at drawing and so I prefer start it with a fanfiction.

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Characters and story plot belong to *KiraUchiha87

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:iconkirikromium:
Nella prima parte Airi sembra il mio istruttore che mi diceva che andavo ad una lentezza tale che magari, in dieci anni, saremmo arrivati a destinazione!...poi anche il mio istruttore diceva che facevo piangere la macchina quando facevo le curve troppo strette! XDD Mi piace davvero un sacco! Non vedo l'ora di leggere il prossimo capitolo!
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*KirAlien Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahahahah XD il mio istruttore mi ricordo mi diceva 'quello è sulle strisce, dovresti farlo passare' perchè non mi fermavo mai XD
cmq questo capitolo è ancora incompleto XD presto posterò il capitolo completo ^^
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:iconkirikromium:
Bene! non vedo l'ora! *W*
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!TomoKOMI Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaah,so cool!Poor Jameyyy...Airi is so bad......T^T............
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*KirAlien Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahahah yeah XD I dunno how he can still be her friend lol
btw I hope is enough good ;w;
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!TomoKOMI Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
There are some little mistakes,but is alright,they're not that obvious.XD
And of course,is really cool:la:
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*KirAlien Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah ok XD maybe with writing I'll improve my english too XD
thank you dear :la:
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!TomoKOMI Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
U will.^^
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*KirAlien Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very very much for your support sis :hug: you know this means a lot for me ;w;
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!TomoKOMI Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha,is no problem,onee-sama:dummy:
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